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Post by countrygirl5 on Jun 14, 2005 21:41:56 GMT -5
this is a poem about my friends that made me angry.
My friends once hung out with me Now all they do is try to flee its like I'm a monster like some brude all I can say is how rude!
They like to talk about death so do I but just like I'm no one they blow me off I can't stand my friends why do they want me dead
I don't like them any more I only like four there is ardon, natalie, kelsey, and chris I feel so alone at least they like me for who I am how rude the others are!!!!
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Post by corona on Jun 14, 2005 21:48:43 GMT -5
Is it supposed to be free verse? Did you intend to make some parts rhyme and others not? You could try to explain the situation a bit more, but other than that it's pretty cool.
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Post by countrygirl5 on Jun 15, 2005 15:46:54 GMT -5
Yes it is free verse and I tried to make some parts rhyme and some none
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Post by unlovedgurl on Jul 12, 2005 21:32:54 GMT -5
kool
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